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frozen:

oh susan, oh susan could this ever be again. I asked you to marry me. out on the freezing winter day, you hung out in the cold. and when you tried, i was gone.

(chorus) cause i’m frozen under an ocean of ice. i don’t know how to survive, i might be dead in my mind. I’m frozen. though the winter has gone, i’m still dead inside. I’m frozen.

i sit out in this solid state and think about did you ever care. did you care enough to think about the consquences of me not being free. from being exactly the opposite of who i want to be.
And you wonder why you never see me

(chorus)cause i’m frozen under an ocean of ice. i don’t know how to survive, i might be dead in my mind. I’m frozen. though the winter has gone, i’m still dead inside. I’m frozen.

and i want to know have you ever seen rain. and i want to know could this ever be the same.
And i don’t want to be the one put you to ashamed. and i don’t want to be the one who took you for granted. and i don’t want to be the one who put all the blame on you. And i don’t want to be the one who Lead you away and I want to be the one.

(chorus)cause i’m frozen under an ocean of ice. i don’t know how to survive, i might be dead in my mind. I’m frozen. though the winter has gone, i’m still dead inside. I’m frozen. but’ll be alright . I’m frozen. but’ll be alright .I’m frozen. I hope this ice age is coming free

crime:

I was falling like a star and you weren’t their to catch me. I was walking right next to you. you acted like you didn’t see me. I was drowning in the sea and you didn’t dive into save me. In my heart its raining. I guess my heart isn’t water proof.

(Chorus) is it a crime that i’m overreacting to the sight of her interacting. Maybe i should just be happy. and hope her life ends up crappy. but everyone knows i still love you.

falling apart and i learned my lesson. the choices i made are going to teach me not to question the deception, caused by you. I learned to create my paradise.

Chorus

so what we had wasn’t good enough. i’ve found the sin you been hiding. at least i where you been maybe i can bury this alive.

Chorus

I don’t believe i’ll be alright. i don’t believe you’ll be ok. I don’t believe your truly over me. I do believe you quit on me. I do blame you for every lie.I do believe that every time you look in his eyes you see mine

white Bricked house:

will i one day be a champion. i ask myself this question every night. Will i be a
leader or am i the chosen one. Or am i like everyone( a follower, a liar). Or
will i or i can step outside the box and be someone different and make a change.

(chorus)im stuck in this white bricked house.what’s this all about? Aren’t we all the same? why is there so much pain?

maybe its my turn to say let this be a day we pray to make these walls go away.
Maybe this will the day we take these walls down and we’ll be ok. Maybe this
will the day we rise up and wont go down.

(chorus)

im making a choice, im givin my all to make sure i bring down all these walls and there stupid laws.

(chorus)

Shes a beauty queen shes a drama queen and that between and shes got control over me ( thats whatshe thinks).She got so many faces ( oh i swear shes crazy) i don’t know know what real or not it’s like making a list and checking it twice cause she has no life and nobody but me.

(chorus)She said it 9 months to tame you and I wont go back to that. I got the rights to name you if i choose to i do that. But wecan make it work if you just stay with me.

She thinks she can do everythingBring up her bling Wear her fancy clothes Knowing what she knows But she’s not going to control me…..anymore

No, she’s not gonna control me….
Anymore

(chorus)She said it 9 months to tame you and I wont go back to that. I got the rights to name you if i choose to i do that. But wecan make it work if you just stay with me.

she like a dog who stands by you side sometimes your mad and you want to kick it but then she similes