If you deep fry a chicken golden-brown, is that not a sin? What if you put Stovetop with it, is it not a blessing or is it a dressing?Like peanut butter to the bread, I’m gonna mess with your head. Just because I like mayo doesn’t mean I’m white.I’m pecan brown my lyrics are tight! I keeps it real, son like a toy in a happy meal! My rhymes are smooth like butter, you’re a baby suckin’ on an utter. Wipe the milk off your face, shut up, sit down, and stay in a childs place! I liked my women big butted, I don’t call em’ back so that makes me cold-nuted.They can be nappy headed, or weave down to they’re sleeve, when they say, “I love you”, it’s time for me to leave!I grew up poor in the streets,fried bologna, spam, and hotdogz were my eats. Now I’m livin’ large eatin’ Steaks and Scrimps, Livin’ life like a Pimps!They think I’m indian, cuz’ they call me Smack-a-hoe! I never hit with my hand, I let my words flow.
So, you “keeps it real,” and you live large eating steaks and shrimps, living life like a pimp? Please, that is not real at all, and you have terrible lyrics, terrible subject matter, terrible everything. Please don’t record, because you’re resulting CD might be a new cause to ear cancer.
it has that old school silliness or goofiness to it…it needs more work ….you are creative just needs more of one style to your lyrics….keep working at it !
HA!!PLEASE TELL ME YOU WERE FOOLING AROUND!!!!
You Didnt Even Type Them Like If They Were Lyrics
I Give You A “-4″
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YOU SUCK!!! but it’s pretty good compared to some of the stuff out today
my favortie line is :”keeps it real, son like a toy in a happy meal! “
WHACK! Talk about gangs and violence. It works for Snoop!
pretty poor but i have stolen these lyrics and i will copywrite them first thing tomorrow
theyre good, keep workin on it heres a tip write it in verse each line should have between 3 and 5 words and not every line has to rhyme with the line before it
ok heres tha deal u need work n u gotta make ur lyrics like this
If you deep fry a chicken golden-brown, is that not a sin
What if you put Stovetop with it, is it not a blessing or is it a
dressing
Like peanut butter to the bread, I’m gonna mess with your
head
n u also every single word dont have to rhymes cuz when u get to many rhymin words then it jus starts to sound worse n worse as tha song goes on
jus keep workin at it n ull keepin gettin better but try writtin bout ur life n ur struggle n itll probably come out better
they suck!